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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 17, 2005 20:42:26 GMT -5
Hey yall this is a story im doin on another site and i decided to bring it to my own site and im not writin it by myself my cuz is helpin but since im going to copy and paste the first parts to catch yall up ill tell yall who wrote wat
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 17, 2005 20:52:49 GMT -5
Plot:Y/N is a 16 year old girl..Thats mom has been moving all over the place..just as yall get settled its time 2 move once again..and this time its permanent..atleast she says.. " I cant help it y/n...im a business women...deal with it" thats her favorite line..I have been from Californa 2 Indiana.. Texas from Ohio.. New Jersey 2 Flordia and Now that we have got settled in New York were moving back 2 Californa........
TELL ME WAT YALL THINK SO FAR BRE AND I CAME UP WITH THAT PART TOGETHER
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Post by Jim Jones First Lady on Jun 17, 2005 22:46:32 GMT -5
KEEP IT GOING RIA.
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Post by 2affectionate on Jun 18, 2005 22:11:03 GMT -5
bump
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 19, 2005 15:21:05 GMT -5
Cast
Dreux* Girfriend at first*/Endia
Omari*Girlfriend at first*/Shannon
Jarell*Girlfriend at first*/ashay (ah-shay)
Demario*Girlfriend at first*/razberie'
The REAL couples after they get rid of Endia,Shannon,Ashay,and Razberie
Dreux and y/n
omari and Breonna a.k.a pooh or Bre
J-Boog and Maya
Demario and La'Shara a.k.a Shara
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 19, 2005 17:41:43 GMT -5
Y/N  Parents *but never see's dad that much*  Breonna  Maya  La'Shara  The Boyz  Dreux Mama  and thats just me postin' some pics ill post chap. 1 when someone bump |
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 19, 2005 17:45:39 GMT -5
Breonna  |
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 19, 2005 18:05:07 GMT -5
La'shara  |
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Post by Jim Jones First Lady on Jun 19, 2005 20:04:04 GMT -5
BUMP IT UP
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 20, 2005 1:18:07 GMT -5
Chapter 1 ----The move U: ok mom you sure this is permanent?? y/m: yes im sure now go get dressed U: *sigh*under ya breath* it better be y/m: excuse me?? U: nothin I went upstairs and took my shower and did my hygiene thing and put on    I went downstairs and finshed my orange jucie y/m: call yo daddy and tell him we on our way out u: ok and thats what i did..i called him..he wanna act like he all busy or what not he need 2 be busy gettin' me Llyod Banks number thats what he need 2 be doin' y/m: LETS GO Y/N U: ok hold on y/m: NOW So when we made it 2 the airport.. 2 sexy dudes was starin' wooo..they came ova boy 1: wazzup sexy U: hey boy 2: damn ma you and ya sister got it going on y/m: excuse me young man but your half my age lets go y/n *grabbin yo arm* U: byeeee f/v: I NEED FLIGHT 4532 NEW YORK 2 LOS ANGLES PLEASE I REPEAT 4532 NEW YORK 2 LOS ANGLES PLEASE U: well thats us the plane ride was long 5 hours..We was in 1st class so we got regular food it was still nasty..the plane landed Chapter 2 ------My New Life BUMP BUMP BUMP IT UP BRE WROTE THIS PART |
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 20, 2005 1:27:47 GMT -5
ok yall heres more I step off the plane....and now its the beginning of my new Californa life y/m: come on y/n lets rent a car y/n:can I get my own car cuz me and u sharin a car aint gone work fa sho y/m:damn girl what u think money grow on trees but...... yea u can get your own cuz u right me and u sharin a car aint gone work So we finally get a taxi..the streets arent that busy as New York..When we got in the Taxi the driver was tryin 2 spit it was kinda funny he look like  T/D: hey little momma lookin mighty fine 2day y/m: excuse me but my daughter is only 16 T/D: i bet she is but i was talkin' 2 you y/n: ooo momma y/m: ooo momma what? y/n: he spittin you know tryin 2 holla.. y/m: i dont care what he is tryin 2 do im a successful designer he is a taxi driver y/m: what i look like y/n:well u right u own your own business and he makes $2.50 an hour that aint gone work y/m:shut up y/n y/n well excuuuuuuuuse me t/d:oh and i make $3.50 an hour y/n: oh yeah big difference t/d:well here u are(yall pull up at the dealership) y/m:thanks..oh and here(handing him the money) T/d:naw its free since u soo fine...but u can give me your number y/m:I think not .....thanks again and bye(walking off) T/D:wait.... ok well atleast take my number y/m: *sighs* fine I WROTE THIS PART |
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Post by FizzsGurlyGurl on Jun 20, 2005 1:37:15 GMT -5
We were walking around the dealership U: mom you buggin' im not gonna get no beat up as..car Mom: excuse me but im the one with the money U: shi.. i rather walk then Mom: you got a fail little mouth and you sho didnt get it from me U: i get it from my daddie Mom: i guess so So we were lookin at different cars when U: Mom MOM this is this it  Mom: no not at all U: please mom..dad would of bought it When i bring up him she alwayz tries 2 compete with him ion know why M: fine It was a masterpeice it was me..ill be the best in my neighborhood it looked like U: ooooo thanx mom thanx so much Dealer: is this the one you want? Mom: yeah well take it After she got finished signin' some papers..we were off 2 see the wizard..naw but we was off 2 our new house..when we got there my mouth almost dropped it looked like      U: wow mom you did the dam..dang thang y/m:....................... BUMP IT UP BRE WROTE THIS PART |
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Post by ~*~Dyme Piece~*~ on Jun 20, 2005 13:01:53 GMT -5
dang chicka i aint know you was writin a story you could have told me! bump gurl i like it i like it
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Post by Jackie~n~Omari on Jun 24, 2005 13:50:11 GMT -5
forreal all secretive and stuff lol bump bump bump
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Post by ~*~Dyme Piece~*~ on Jun 24, 2005 15:33:04 GMT -5
lol! bump
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